Episode Commentary
Season One, Episode Fifteen – “Not so Innocent”
Hello and welcome back my survivor friends. How are we all doing? How’s the apocalypse treating you?
What did you think of the episode? Frankly I struggled writing this one and my editing team helped A LOT! Thank you Duane! If anyone wants to help with writing or editing please feel free to reach out.
I didn’t want to just have action. The action turns into “he-said-she-said” type motion-without-meaning after a while.And that get’s boring.
There are no stakes. Not snakes, stakes. You always have to ask and answer that question: what are the stakes here?
On the flip side you don’t want to bulk up with too much exposition and emotions – because that gets boring too.
The key is to marry the exposition and stakes with the action. Have what the characters do and say make yourpoints for you.
Language is a powerful thing. Story telling is a basic, human, powerful thing.
So – long story short (pun absolutely intended) I had to wrestle with that in this episode.
I wanted to make sure that we were understanding the motivation of the characters and moving the broader narrative forward and even exploring some deeper themes.
And, as it turns out, this is a common theme in apocalyptic literature – how does your current pre-apocalypse skill set translate into a post-apocalyptic world? It’s not just preppers and backwoodsmen who will do well. It’s also the resilient, the fast, the smart and those willing to lead.
And to show this we take individuals out of the real world and drop them int the apocalypse – in our case Janet the type-A lawyer and the old man, a disgraced doctor turned ultra-runner.
That’s the theme that I’m trying to play with. And that’s what makes science fiction so much fun. Because you can create these mashups and play with them. What would a pre-school teacher do in an alien invasion? What would the ballet-teacher do in an alternate universe? I don’t know but you could write that story.
One of my favorite versions of this is when Rod Serlingdropped a book loving bank teller into the apocalypse in episode 8 of the original Twighlight Zone titled “Time Enough at Last”. First aired in 1959 and basedon a story by Lynn Venable.
In this episode Henry Bemis played by Burgess Meredith,.loves books yet is surrounded by those who would prevent him from reading them. (You know Burgess Meredith as the original Penguin in the Batman TV series and as Rocky’s crusty old coach Mickey in the Rocky movies.)
The episode follows Bemis through a post-apocalyptic world, touching on such social issues as anti-intellectualism, the dangers of reliance upon technology, and the difference between solitude and loneliness. In the end he breaks his glasses so he can’t read the books even though he’s the last one alive.
This was one of the most popular episodes of the original Twilight zone.
Anyhow, that’s an example of how you can make an episode compelling without much action at all.
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